Blue Jay

bold and beautiful 
with loud shrills raising its crest
blue jay fights defends

Fourth Place: Tania Kitchen Contest-1/22/21
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Allison Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Frances:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 23, 2021 at 11:44 AM
- Congratulations on your winning haiku, Frances :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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January 22, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Frances, I was a pleased to read your Haiku with great imagery and flow . Congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve
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January 22, 2021 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations on the win Frances! Linda
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January 22, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Frances, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Indeed you chose to represent a beautiful bold bird.
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January 18, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Francis, you have perfectly captured the personality of this noisy bird in your haiku! Best wishes for the contest!
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 12:07 PM
great imagery Frances:-) hugs jan xx
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