Blue Jay

(B)lue Jay in a flock (L)and in the Cherry Tree (U)nder marbled color skies (E)ver so bright with the snow (J)oyfully jumping together (A)round on the ground (Y)esterday left some seed to be found Heidi Sands 12/20/20

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/25/2023 7:19:00 PM

We are a big bird family and we are happy when the blue jay sticks around for winter. Aren't they pretty on the snow,? "Under marbled colored skies" What lovely imagery. What a pretty poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2023 6:15:00 AM

I love the birds. Yes. They are pretty in the snow. Marbled skies...comes from beautiful scenes of the sky that I see from this hill. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)

Ann Foster

Date: 12/29/2020 10:20:00 AM

Wonderful fun. At my house the birds leave nothing behind.. hehe.. Great write... Have the very nicest day. Ann

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/29/2020 11:28:00 AM

Wow, it sounds like you have many there. I usually have many more than this. Not too many are coming by lately. I enjoy watching them. Thank you for your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day too :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/28/2020 11:21:00 AM

A happy joyful write about Blue Jays, unfortunately, don't have them in South Africa but your description of them is beautiful. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and hope 2021 will bring all your dreams to fruition Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/29/2020 6:48:00 AM

Hi Jennifer. I used to see Blue Jays a lot years ago. Then not so much in past few years. But, this winter, some flocks have come by. I appreciate your comment. I hope you had a great Christmas and Happy New Year to you! Thank you :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/21/2020 5:43:00 PM

I love the idea of marbled skies, such happy little birds aren't they, nice write, it makes me smile , Merry Christmas dear Heidi, to you and your loved ones

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2020 6:26:00 PM

Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind comment. Merry Christmas to you. I hope you are well. Enjoy. Peace :)