Blue Jay

parched land awaits drops as clouds hatch little blue eggs moist blue jays arrive May 9, 2020 For Haiku - Blue Jay Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Tania Kitchin Winner: Fourth Place

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/15/2020 11:56:00 AM

Beautiful penning, congratulations for your win Aditi, xomo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 12:14:00 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes Mo :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/15/2020 4:34:00 AM

Aditi, congrats on your blue Jay win. Mohan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 4:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Mohan :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2020 5:59:00 PM

lovely imagery Aditi, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 8:53:00 PM

Thank you Jan for your encouragement :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2020 4:15:00 PM

Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 4:22:00 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest Tania. Appreciate your words :)

John Watt

Date: 5/14/2020 12:38:00 PM

Aditi, I sure enjoyed your creative side approaching this haiku. Congratulations on your win today ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 12:42:00 PM

I am glad you did. Thank you for your appreciation John :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/14/2020 12:15:00 PM

Very original, lovely imagery, congratulations on your win in the contest-

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 12:21:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Michelle :)