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Blue Jay

parched land awaits drops
as clouds hatch little blue eggs
moist blue jays arrive

May 9, 2020
For Haiku - Blue Jay Poetry Contest
Sponsored By: Tania Kitchin
Winner: Fourth Place

Copyright © Aditi Mishra | Year Posted 2020

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 15, 2020 at 11:56 AM

Beautiful penning, congratulations for your win Aditi, xomo

May 15, 2020 at 12:14 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes Mo :)

May 15, 2020 at 4:34 AM

Aditi, congrats on your blue Jay win. Mohan

May 15, 2020 at 4:40 AM

Thank you so much Mohan :)

May 14, 2020 at 5:59 PM

lovely imagery Aditi, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

May 14, 2020 at 8:53 PM

Thank you Jan for your encouragement :)

May 14, 2020 at 4:15 PM

Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

May 14, 2020 at 4:22 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest Tania. Appreciate your words :)

May 14, 2020 at 12:38 PM

Aditi, I sure enjoyed your creative side approaching this haiku. Congratulations on your win today ~ John

May 14, 2020 at 12:42 PM

I am glad you did. Thank you for your appreciation John :)

Michelle Faulkner

May 14, 2020 at 12:15 PM

Very original, lovely imagery, congratulations on your win in the contest-

May 14, 2020 at 12:21 PM

Thank you for your kind words Michelle :)

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