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Blue Is a Pluvious Color

He said  
remember me by the shape of my laugh
but I rarely saw a smile
climbing upon his image

left with no choice than
wrap those rare moments
seized with Polaroid seconds
I'm ordering them not to wear blue faces
as that was the only color he didn't want to follow him

consider it done

I'll lineup macarons in every tone
is possible to imagine
I'll spread gummy bears all over that
wooden plate which holds your body
so you can finally perceive
how it feels lying on the rainbow

yes
I'll pare down those blue shades
so that even rainbow cognises
how does it feel
being left
ripped

and no
there will be no rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/21/2017 2:00:00 AM
I saw your poem in High Critique, it had some good comments. So I decided to come looking for you here, and to my surprise you get hardly any comments. Which is a shame, because you write well! This is a beautiful, tender and sensitive poem....
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 9/21/2017 2:03:00 AM
Thank you :)

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