Dawn Gordon Poet Limerick

Blue From Rio

Today I had the chance to hold "the blue from rio",
A blue bird on a skateboard you should meet and know,
A fancy parrot from the happy meal kid's land,
Preening all his gorgeous feathers on his wheeled stand,
Visit the happy meal site! Join his feathered flow.

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Dawn Gordon April 14, 2011 at 3:59 PM the second line looks like it is one syllable off though...I did this quite fast outside...that is all I can see...but next time let me know what the issue is first..

Dawn Gordon April 14, 2011 at 3:57 PM in canada rio, know and flow rhyme, and up here land and stand rhyme, I am unsure of them british sounding accents if you hear them differently then we do

Dawn Gordon April 14, 2011 at 3:56 PM hmm I understood limerick from what I read online as 1,2.5 as rhyming then lines 3 and 4 rhyme and I did syllables? it is about the bird from the new movies, could you let me know where i went wrong?