Blue Fly

I see no problem of that blue fly
Always gets in feces
Natural phenomena
The worldly **** is the assembly
Of all that blue flies in one place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 9:07 AM
- Nasty blue flies .... in cow shit (?).... where will you drop them .... (?) ..... I understand that it is a natural phenomena, and that it is good that they stay in one place :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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February 26, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Would you please read it again? Thank you for reading and this comment dear Anne.
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