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Blue Feathers

Blue Feathers


Pillars of darkness
Dances of blue feathers on moon
'Neath my dream catcher


Written: July 13,2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2015 10:23:00 AM

coming back to this one again. It is one of your best for imagery.

Theresa Cw
Date: 10/15/2015 12:06:00 AM

Sorry Andrea for not seeing this comment any sooner. Thank you very much for my belated thanks. I had to change my internet browser and email. At least I can read you comments now. It does make life a lot easier now.

Shane Cooper

Date: 7/28/2015 3:52:00 AM

Beautifully written Theresa, your words dance on the page. A 7 and congrats on the win. It is well deserved for this Haiku. love Shane xxx

Theresa Cw
Date: 8/17/2015 11:56:00 AM

Thank you very much Shane for the congrats. I'm not receiving anything from Poetry Soup for emails or comments on my poems. Don't think it was poetry soups fault it was my internet provider. Had to change to a different provider. Hopefully I will get responses now. Guess I'll soon find out. Live, love, light.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/27/2015 7:46:00 PM

Brilliant haiku, deserving of its wonderful win! Congratulations! Pandita

Theresa Cw
Date: 8/17/2015 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so very much Pandita for the late comment on my part, not getting anything from poetry soup in my email account. Had to change to a different, site hopefully this other site is better. Thanks again for the congrats.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/18/2015 3:16:00 PM

Very cute. This is an interesting poem. The moon can sometimes appear blue, or at least it's called a blue moon so your use of blue feathers is clever.

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/19/2015 5:16:00 PM

Thank you so very much Duke for your beauty of words upon this penned haiku of mine. Take care and wishing you the best of the week ahead..... hugs Theresa

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/17/2015 9:43:00 PM

Theresa, congrats on your first place win with this lovely haiku! Love, KIm

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/19/2015 5:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Kim for your very thoughtful comment on this penned Haiku of mine and especially for the congrats. Hugs Theresa

Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 . I thought of a dream catcher poem, ever so often I collect feathers left behind and make dream catchers with natural raw materials, sometimes I will weave beads. Hugs Eve

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/16/2015 6:47:00 PM

Thank you very much Eve for your beautiful comment on my penned haiku for. I really love dream catchers I have on hanging in my bedroom and also in the living room; they are so very beautiful especially when a person puts bead work into them I have one hanging in my vehicle also. hugs Theresa

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/16/2015 12:27:00 PM

Great picture you paint in a very few words, my dear Theresa! Kudos... love, Jack xxx

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/16/2015 12:37:00 PM

Thank you very kindly Jack for your most welcoming kind words... hugs Theresa

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/16/2015 9:35:00 AM

I love your unique twist to the contest!! Great one, and a big congrats to you !!

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/16/2015 6:41:00 PM

Thank you very much Carrie for your great comment and congrats on my win !!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2015 4:24:00 AM

Wonderful Theresa! I have a dream catcher near the head of my bed near my window, and believe it or not, it has blue feathers. (Smile.) Congratulations on your outstanding win! 7

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/16/2015 6:44:00 PM

Thank you very much Connie for your beautiful comment and congrats on my win and especially for the 7.