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Blue Eyes

The blue eyes stared lost In front of the ocean waves That crashed with fury Waiting to see an image That confirms her dearest hopes 3-12-2016

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Date: 3/12/2016 7:14:00 AM
Chilling and mysterious Nayda. A wonderful tanka! ; )
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/12/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Connie

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