Blue Eyes

The blue eyes stared lost
In front of the ocean waves
That crashed with fury
Waiting to see an image
That confirms her dearest hopes











3-12-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Chilling and mysterious Nayda. A wonderful tanka! ; )
Negron Flores Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Thank you Connie
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