Get Your Premium Membership

Blue Eyes

There was a blue in his eyes when his frown creased his brow, a blue in his eyes when tears slipped down his cheeks; I fell in love with the blue in his eyes. I drowned in the ocean When he looked at me, I felt my lungs hitch as air swirl along my tongue. There was a blue in his eyes, when he let me go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/26/2010 4:39:00 PM
Also a wonderful poem, Madison!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2010 8:15:00 AM
I love blue eyes too. My husband, one son and grandson have the bluest eyes. Enjoyed reading your poem. God Bless Phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2010 11:12:00 AM
It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Madison. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs