Get Your Premium Membership

Blue Dress

Put your blue dress on and let your hair down too- your hair that is so beautiful you need no fancy “do.” That gown a royal blue - you know the one I mean! The sequins on its bodice make you glitter like a queen. The backless part of it - a large X made of lace exquisitely reveals your shoulders’ white bare grace. I’ve bought for you a bracelet of diamonds for your wrist. Wear it too; it’s fashioned of bright stars heaven-kissed! I’ll wait out in the car while you don your blue chiffon, afraid I’ll want to take it off once you have got it on! Dec. 27, 2019 for Anthony Slausin's Blue Dress Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/30/2019 5:02:00 PM
Very nice poem, Andrea.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2019 10:30:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely dress and a beautiful woman beneath. Best wishes.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2019 9:07:00 PM
beautifully penned Andrea...perhaps it's best he waits in the car if the dress is that hot....best wishes in the contest... :) hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2019 11:39:00 AM
Sounds like quite a beautiful dress, Andrea. I love your description and enjoyed the humor at the end. Best wishes in Anthony's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2019 5:38:00 PM
Of bright stars heaven kissed. Diamonds have never been described so ethereally. And your last verse truly tickled that youthful place in my heart. <3 :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 11:46:00 PM
What a wonderful dress! I immediately pictured a good friend of mine who always makes blue look more blue with her sky blue eyes.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 11:37:00 PM
this is beautiful, Andrea, good luck.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 9:47:00 PM
What an exquisite blue dress!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 9:41:00 PM
The poem reminds me of the song "Devil with a Blue Dress on" from the late 60's. I have seeen some foxes with blue dresses on. Nice verse! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 7:17:00 PM
G'day Andrea … once again, a delightful little ballad that is so good to recite - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem adorned in blue--lovely write Andrea--tender romance!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 3:45:00 PM
Oh my such beauty, such longing, such insatiable desire breathes life into every line...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 3:14:00 PM
Now you know how our mind works...good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/27/2019 8:06:00 PM
so does this mean I am not beautiful? (I'm referencing that one contest about Katherine Hepburn saying only plain women understand men. Not beautiful ones. haha. I can't wrap my head around THAT and how to write for it???)
Date: 12/27/2019 2:08:00 PM
Hello Andrea, this sounds like a beautiful outfit for going somewhere special. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 12:15:00 PM
ha ha ha i especially love the ending, exquisitely penned Andrea I hope this does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things