Blue Dress

Put your blue dress on
and let your hair down too-
your hair that is so beautiful
you need no fancy “do.”

That gown a royal blue -
you know the one I mean!
The sequins on its bodice
make you glitter like a queen.

The backless part of it -
a large X made of lace
exquisitely reveals
your shoulders’ white bare grace.

I’ve bought for you a bracelet
of diamonds for your wrist.
Wear it too;  it’s fashioned
of bright stars heaven-kissed!

I’ll wait out in the car
while you don your blue chiffon,
afraid I’ll want to take it off
once you have got it on!

Dec. 27, 2019 for Anthony Slausin's Blue Dress Poetry Contest
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Bayles Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Very nice poem, Andrea.
Ligon Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Sounds like a lovely dress and a beautiful woman beneath. Best wishes.
Adams Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:07 PM
beautifully penned Andrea...perhaps it's best he waits in the car if the dress is that hot....best wishes in the contest... :) hugs
Devonshire Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Sounds like quite a beautiful dress, Andrea. I love your description and enjoyed the humor at the end. Best wishes in Anthony's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Of bright stars heaven kissed. Diamonds have never been described so ethereally. And your last verse truly tickled that youthful place in my heart. <3 :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 11:46 PM
What a wonderful dress! I immediately pictured a good friend of mine who always makes blue look more blue with her sky blue eyes.
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 11:37 PM
this is beautiful, Andrea, good luck.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 9:47 PM
What an exquisite blue dress!
Anish Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 9:41 PM
The poem reminds me of the song "Devil with a Blue Dress on" from the late 60's. I have seeen some foxes with blue dresses on. Nice verse! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Laurie Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:17 PM
G'day Andrea … once again, a delightful little ballad that is so good to recite - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Beautiful poem adorned in blue--lovely write Andrea--tender romance!
Wolves Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Oh my such beauty, such longing, such insatiable desire breathes life into every line...
Parker Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Now you know how our mind works...good luck in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 8:06 PM
so does this mean I am not beautiful? (I'm referencing that one contest about Katherine Hepburn saying only plain women understand men. Not beautiful ones. haha. I can't wrap my head around THAT and how to write for it???)
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Hello Andrea, this sounds like a beautiful outfit for going somewhere special. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 12:15 PM
ha ha ha i especially love the ending, exquisitely penned Andrea I hope this does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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