Blue Devils

Teardrops in my palms Shapeless, bitter emotions I tried relentlessly to caress The sour taste, warm touch Burns my flesh.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 6:20:00 PM

Jhan, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd

Johan Poet
Date: 11/12/2012 4:37:00 PM

thanks ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2012 5:59:00 AM

Congrats on your excellent poetry being featured this week Johan. Love, Carol

Johan Poet
Date: 11/7/2012 12:18:00 PM

thanks Carol ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2012 4:56:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Johan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Johan Poet
Date: 10/30/2012 11:12:00 AM

thank you