Blue Day

Black banked ominous clouds above
Heavy heart circulates blood
Tiny raindrops fall and splatter
Tear drops threaten to flood

Holiday season happy times
Family plans grand fun
Should be a season of hope, cheer
Though times life feels undone  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 2:19 PM
- "Though times life feels undone" .....this line says a lot, dear Sara - Hope you feel better today - hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Hi, Sara. Here's a big hug...(((Sara))) to chase those black clouds away!
Horne Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:46 PM
aww, such a sad write, my friend - I hope you aren't really feeling down
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