Kim Rodrigues Poet Couplet

Blue Danube Strauss

Full length frontal flesh pressed into half-awake spouse.
Smoldering and smelted as one Blue Danube strauss.

The bluebirds twitter a blithesome tune of Wintergray.
Warmth of coffee, sweet pastries and a tulip’d bouquet.

1/11/2020

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Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2020 at 4:15 PM I swear you are getting better, Kim, and I dare say I did not think that would be possible.

Gershon Wolf January 12, 2020 at 10:19 PM Strauss may even be blushing a bit, partaking of his morning shtrudel! LOL. Nicely pictured, Kim! Happy wake-up call! ~ Rollin' on the River! Kim Rodrigues January 13, 2020 at 6:58 AM LOL! Yes, I love to highlight marriage love - a good kind of love. Have your strudel and blush away.

Silent One January 12, 2020 at 3:50 PM now if i had done a four liner.. this would have been just perfect... did you practice before hand? Love that third line Silent One January 12, 2020 at 4:34 PM I was just joking Kim.. :) Kim Rodrigues January 12, 2020 at 4:15 PM No sir, my environment speaks to me :) Happy New Year! :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 12, 2020 at 12:55 AM Awesome poetry dear Kim, Blessings, Jennifer. Kim Rodrigues January 12, 2020 at 7:12 AM Thank you, sweet lady!

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2020 at 11:08 PM I smiled all the way through reading this Kim. A delight! xxoo Kim Rodrigues January 12, 2020 at 7:11 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Line Gauthier January 11, 2020 at 9:07 PM Lovely, Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 12, 2020 at 7:11 AM Thank you, sweet Line!

Demetrios Trifiatis January 11, 2020 at 12:17 PM Beautifully intringuing dearest , Kim! Kim Rodrigues January 12, 2020 at 7:10 AM Thank you, my wonderful friend!