Blue Bowls

Hear the clatter
of the dark blue bowls

see how nicely
they infold inside each other

So much like you and I
my endless Latin lover.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 8:07 PM
ahhh, wonderful little love poem!!
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 11:30 AM
I like the rhythm and the flow---and the infolding. May it never unfold! ~ gw
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Gershon Wolf. It all to often unfolds sadly enough
Krutsinger Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 1:38 AM
This has a sweetness about it, yet, paints such an intimate photo in my mind.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Glad to hear that Dear Caren
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Nice comparison using a simple object.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Kim
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