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Spring has been trying to come to our area since sometimes in December..A few warm days would bring forth grass turning spring-green, a plant or tree doning some blooms..Wildflowers and weeds have bloomed off and on for three months..It is an unseaonablely warm winter which happens every so many years..I have seen butterflies now for over a week which would make them to have come out in February...I was sadden today when one flew into my car.. blue blue butterfly early spring flight tasting blooms... blue remnants coat car This form is called Halibun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/15/2012 1:44:00 PM
this was the warmest winter I can remember.A very lovel poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/7/2012 12:43:00 AM
a refreshing spray of words that invite the flutter of spring's arrival.... i love butterflies too!.... greeat work and good use of form, sara..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:48:00 PM
dreamy delightful prelude to Spring Sara.. needing some color and pretty flowers to appear luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 2:24:00 PM
Sara, at Callaway Gardens I saw some incredibly beautiful blue butterflies, unlike any I'd seen in Florida. Are these native to Georgia? Your poem is delightful, but I did feel sad thinking about the blue remnants on the car. They are such fragile creatures. Thank you for introducing me to a new form! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2012 11:12:00 AM
Spring has sprung for the most part here Sara, many trees have bloomed, and the weather has been mile all winter. Beautiful picture you've painted here with your words. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:04:00 AM
What the halibut??? did you an Karter have a good sday?
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:46:00 AM
I love yours butterfly haiky Sara. - early last. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:34:00 AM
Sara you are doing great with this form, I like the idea of it might give it a go..David
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:26:00 PM
Sara, this is very beautiful... always..pd
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:27:00 PM
I love butterflies and my favorite color is blue. This is so sad. I'm sorry you had to experience that. I hate hitting any living thing with my car or when they fly into me. :( Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:44:00 PM
interesting form. first for me to see it, thanks for the poem Sara. Hope you have a lovely spring :)
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:57:00 PM
Aww that is so sad Sara! Yes, the butterflies come out to taste the new blooms that have come out due to the warm weather! It's bad that the weather still fluctuates and causing the butterflies to come out and possibly die...not via a car! Your Haiku is beautiful and full of life....until the end with the car of course! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:20:00 PM
I have never heard of this form before, Sara. I enjoyed reading your poem. Love, Kim
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