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Blue Bird's New Flight

Blue sky awaking now slowly opens up eyes turning its reflection below sky blue. A bird spreading its wings over the sleeping earth another day's journey to start a flight. © kashinath karmakar (1st July 2011) =============00==============

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 5:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Francine's "Blue on blue on blue" contest. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/3/2011 8:46:00 PM

Great use of form here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/2/2011 11:55:00 AM

Dear Kash, this is one of the best entries I've seen in the contest. Such a beautiful use of the cinquin form and the description is delightful. As you know, health issues have prevented me from participating much here, but I had to offer my congratulations to my dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2011 2:13:00 AM

happy congrats on your shining win, kashi... huggs! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/1/2011 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your HM for this most beautiful entry in the contest luv..enjoy special honor for a delightful work of art luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:09:00 PM

wow, when did you post this?? It's really pretty. Love the cinquain form you chose for it and how you painted the sky blue with a blue bird in it. Congrats on your wonderful little poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:09:00 PM

oops, and your 7!