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Blue Bird's New Flight

Blue sky
awaking now
slowly opens up eyes
turning its reflection below
sky blue.

A bird
spreading its wings
over the sleeping earth
another day's journey to start
a flight.



© kashinath karmakar (1st July 2011)
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naturecinquain

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 5, 2011 at 5:17 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Francine's "Blue on blue on blue" contest. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

July 3, 2011 at 8:46 PM

Great use of form here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

July 2, 2011 at 11:55 AM

Dear Kash, this is one of the best entries I've seen in the contest. Such a beautiful use of the cinquin form and the description is delightful. As you know, health issues have prevented me from participating much here, but I had to offer my congratulations to my dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

July 2, 2011 at 2:13 AM

happy congrats on your shining win, kashi... huggs! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 1, 2011 at 8:33 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your HM for this most beautiful entry in the contest luv..enjoy special honor for a delightful work of art luv..

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2011 at 7:09 PM

oops, and your 7!

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2011 at 7:09 PM

wow, when did you post this?? It's really pretty. Love the cinquain form you chose for it and how you painted the sky blue with a blue bird in it. Congrats on your wonderful little poem!