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Blue Birds Fly

at the blanket of early morn, soft and sweet i toss and turn. my heart raced a breathless song; speak t me do i belong? i dreamed of sadness a heart ache song oh my heart, why, you seemed so wrong? when dawn breaks, darkness disappeared my eyes are shut, conscience uncleared. it pierced, it hurts, the sweet sad song; let my dreams flee, as i grow strong as the warmth now embraces me i hear that blissful melody the new day has come to unfold. a forgotten promise, i hold. hope lies from within, now i cry as i plead, do let blue birds fly. ... and then my heart is at peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/26/2010 9:13:00 PM
WOW. thanks for the comments guys... actually i just started writing poems. i raely do so. so again thank you very much! salamat kaayo!
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Date: 8/17/2010 9:33:00 PM
May your heart know true peace.
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Date: 8/17/2010 8:32:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem...thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:48:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Roselle. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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