John Lawless Poet Limerick

Blue Balls

Blue Balls

his head is so COLD he can’t think
his butt - COLD blanched white - never pink
cold he stands quiv’rin’
helpless cold shiv’rin
as his COLD-blue man-bits slow shrink


©1/7/2019


Same Word Winter Limerick Poetry Contest
sponsor – Charles Messina

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Eve Roper January 18, 2019 at 9:24 PM John, awesome well written with great imagery limerick. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2019 at 6:25 PM One of the very best of them. Congrats!

Cindi Rockwell January 15, 2019 at 2:10 PM Absolutely love limericks that give me a chuckle!!! This is great and deserving of first place! Congrats! ~Cindi~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 15, 2019 at 9:20 AM Back with congrats! :)))

Tania Kitchin January 15, 2019 at 4:27 AM Hilarious, congratulations on winning first place!

Charles Messina January 14, 2019 at 10:15 PM John, this is hilarious! Great job on this form...I loved it! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie

Vladislav Raven January 10, 2019 at 2:21 PM Hi John, had to come and read this limerick when I did read the title. Loved the content and the laugh. Have a wonderful Thursday....Mike.

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2019 at 3:24 PM awesome, and I really liked the snowman poem you did over on your comment. That would have worked as well!

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2019 at 9:11 PM John , you gotta use cold in lines 3 and 4 as well. Pretty sure. Anyway, GREAT funny!! (cold he stands quivering. helpless cold shivering) John Lawless January 9, 2019 at 7:59 AM Thanks Andrea, made the changes.

Jan Allison January 7, 2019 at 10:06 AM lol John:-) hugs Jan xx John Lawless January 9, 2019 at 2:39 PM OOPS....stopped to get a cuppa joe and forgot to add a reply.... John Lawless January 9, 2019 at 7:59 AM

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 7, 2019 at 8:39 AM ;p