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Blue Apple Temptation

At the apple farm Buying some blue raspberry apples Cash in my pockets Dying to eat the treat Eventually, I'll break down Following my mom Getting my mouth watery Hiding my drool was just hard I stared at the candy Just sitting there on the counter Knowing that I had to wait makes me want to get closer Limping towards the snack Mother wasn't looking Needing to scoop that sweet Oh, how am I ever going to get it? Protection was there on the apple Quietly, I sneaked Restlessly, I peeked Stopping every five seconds Tempting to eat the apple Up into the air, I raised my hand Vibrating cell phone disturbed my chance With that "Xanthans" destroyed my plan Yawn in my mom's face, but still, I cannot get the treat now Zillion ways it could have failed anyways

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Date: 1/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
made me smile Ina a sweet abecadarian:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ina Nakagawa
Date: 1/7/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks. It's my first one that's posted here. This one is my best one that I've wrote in ABC so far.

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