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My dad never noticed the pond. This poetess can't help but see...

the ingenious geese, in the pond, fluttering wings - six fountains of grace they take off like jet fighters like blue angels all in synch

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Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 10/8/2023 6:34:00 PM

Hello Kim,a wonderful Tanka, Blessings Kim!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2023 6:58:00 PM

Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2023 6:57:00 PM

Thank you!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/7/2023 12:18:00 PM

A lovely Tanka Kim. Your lower phrase mingles nicely with the upper phrase. I love the way you've described modern technology as an extension of nature.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2023 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Jerry!

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/7/2023 3:31:00 AM

Love this tanka dear Kim. A few lines that poetically describe so much to the reader that you can picture the pond and all its activity. Really clever wordplay. You can hear the ‘fluttering of wings’ as they take off! Great poetry. So enjoyed it. Thank you. Hugs and smiles to you for a great weekend. X :):)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2023 10:18:00 AM

Hope your weekend has been wonderful! Thank you!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/6/2023 3:24:00 PM

excellent tanka - your imagery is always spot on.."six fountains of grace" i love that..thanks for commenting on my work :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 4:40:00 PM

Thank you too, Charlotte xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2023 1:32:00 PM

- A beautiful sight, Kim - Lovely poem :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/6/2023 1:31:00 PM

Oh, what a different take on it. Very cool...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2023 12:15:00 PM

Those geese are so graceful aren't they. I am glad you shared this one with us. Very creative way you expressed the idea. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 2:50:00 PM

A sighting I had! Hopefully did it justice! It was so cool. I believe I was the only human to witness this particular sighting.

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2023 11:04:00 AM

Wonderful descriptive Tanka.. nice one Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 12:00:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/6/2023 9:10:00 AM

Like blue angels all in sync- wow, this is such a spellbinding and gorgeous write dear Kim! I absolutely love your word play here, so artistic "they take off like jet fighters" An amazing piece "six fountains of grace" That's really gorgeous!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 12:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Hiya!