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Blue

This self imposing blue enters my mind as a very convincing solid. Can it be more serious than what you suggest? I suppose so, because it feels like carrying a load of wet towels to the line for heat and lightness. I once figured that I am carrying it heavy inside my heart How funny that it is not a rock but a colour that wraps around my face and smothers me.

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Date: 11/26/2014 4:42:00 AM
Very creative. The melancholy blue of depression "not a rock but a color" Fantastic.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Miss Sirak :)
Date: 11/22/2014 8:21:00 PM
Martin, so very sad. But great descriptions. Continue writing your feelings. It has helped me when I am down.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 12:54:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING :)
Date: 11/21/2014 9:31:00 PM
God heals depression, Martin. He's there for you whenever you are ready to lay it all at His feet and let Him carry your load. He will give you peace. Trust in Him . I will pray for you, too. When I am feeling down, what I do is turn my attention to someone else that is hurting and help and support that person. When we lighten someone else's load, we also lighten our own. Any way that is my experience. Hope it helps. Blessings, Darlene
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 12:55:00 AM
Amen Darlene
Date: 11/21/2014 8:20:00 PM
Kind of how I am feeling today!!! Good one.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 12:55:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 11/21/2014 7:59:00 AM
- Wish that sadness could fly away on the wings of the future ..... - A sad poem, Martin - Hope your weekend will be happy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 8:07:00 AM
.... Nothing is free my new friend .... (not for me either :)
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/21/2014 8:04:00 AM
thank you Anne :) Joy is something that I must earn everyday. Blessed are those that enjoys its fruit for free.
Date: 11/21/2014 1:59:00 AM
great imagery but so deep and sad you have portrayed depression very well with this write :-) hugs jan xx
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/21/2014 7:22:00 AM
thank you Jan

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