Blue

Fresh yummy blueberries a dolphin in the sea the turquoise sky above us a platypus in a tree. A recycling bin in your garage a little aqua colored bird a sapphire in a gem store a puddle on the road. The shiny light blue in the rainbow a little blue seal that is smooth to feel BLUE is good for real!

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Skat A

Date: 7/9/2013 12:50:00 PM

Diya, this is a pretty poem., your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2013 3:09:00 AM

- Hi Diya, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 7/2/2013 3:42:00 AM

Lovely descriptives in an inspiring color of the spectrum. I love the line: "the shiny light blue in the rainbow'-- reminds me of God's promises to us.

Diya Jain
Date: 7/2/2013 8:05:00 AM

Thanks so much. These poems are by my 8 year old daughter. She wanted to see if I can post them somewhere and I found this website. I want to encourage her potential.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2013 9:00:00 PM

It's one of the best colors you chose. I love your examples of it.

Diya Jain
Date: 7/2/2013 8:06:00 AM

Thanks so much. These poems are by my 8 year old daughter. She wanted to see if I can post them somewhere and I found this website. I want to encourage her potential. BTW, her name is Diya