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Blue

Feeling kind of low; Emotionally distraught; Color me blah blue. Depression in full color; No crayola can capture. by Joe Flach, for the contest: "blue"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/9/2011 11:04:00 AM
Crayola ought to add "blah blue" to their crayon mix, Joe. Guess gray-blue is as close as they get to the feelings you describe in your excellent tanka. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/9/2011 6:17:00 AM
Excellent Joe, No crayola can capture, but you sure did, wonderful poem for the contest,
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Date: 2/9/2011 1:12:00 AM
stunning images, joe.. i like your style!.. winning streaks to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:31:00 PM
I hope you are feeling better after writing this poem. It helps me when I'm feeling low.
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