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BLUE The rain startled the clouds and fell like a scare of possibilities. The day toggled from then to now like a withering widow A flustered squirrel sat and squirmed and still nibbled at a dry stump like eliciting poetry off ancient prose Some never knew the intent of need others feigned disinterest in inquests turning over their earths again and again I read the prognosis of your vertigo And derived a rider. That it was mere Math to team up or to sleep in the buff An unpredicted rite of passage after all shenanigans stand erased to uncover new aquifer in antique spandrel. To discover that the sky was never this blue. 10 Nov 13 For Chris' contest

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Date: 8/1/2015 10:53:00 PM
Great poem and I see that it won a contest. Bravo! A7
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:40:00 PM
I remember placing this poem in two of my own contests, jaggy! it is a very striking piece - congrats on another win with it! :)
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Date: 4/13/2014 5:58:00 AM
Congrats Nair ! Beautiful poem n great win !!
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:16:00 AM
Jag, very nice and the win as well... Verlena
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Date: 4/12/2014 10:54:00 PM
nice win Jag, love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/12/2014 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win on your wonderful piece of poetry, Jagath
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:01:00 PM
Jag, yes yes, a super awesome win... Linda
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Date: 4/12/2014 6:37:00 PM
very intriguing poetry, Jag. congrats on a very fine win.
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Date: 4/12/2014 2:22:00 PM
Intresting imagery, I enjoyed your winning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2014 9:51:00 AM
Jag, one of your best poems... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:29:00 AM
Wonderful poem, your favorite one. Congrats on the win, S,Nair
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:57:00 PM
congrats on your win in my contest, jaggy, I remember this one well, it placed in another contest of mine...I liked it then, I still like it now...I'd like to see a different one from you, you have so many wonderful pieces, well, there's always next time...:)
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:39:00 PM
wow so very good I would re-read it often a 7 & a fav! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:52:00 PM
gosh, this is such a very interesting one. That last line was impressive. To discover that the sky was never this blue. LOVE it. Congrats.
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:13:00 AM
jag... love how this ended; you piece is so lyrical.. how are you?.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:19:00 AM
Hello Jag, , thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda
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Date: 12/28/2013 3:01:00 PM
passing by to greet you an abundant new year, jag!.... all the best, my friend.. namaste and hugggs!
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Date: 12/25/2013 5:39:00 AM
A grand poem, congrats on yor win, u hav worded it an impresive style n vocab. Sublime poetry. Pls do chk out my latest poem.
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Date: 12/24/2013 12:34:00 AM
Jag, , The end of the year is approaching :) :) :) And guess what? There's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/17/2013 8:14:00 AM
- A lovely poem !!! - Congratulations on your win !!! . -Mary Christmas to you and all you love!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 1:06:00 AM
Or the earth this desolate!
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Date: 12/4/2013 11:02:00 AM
hello, jag.. anything new?.. i didn;t join this contest; got busy then.. just saying hello.. huggs
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Date: 11/28/2013 8:50:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2013 9:51:00 AM
very nice poem love the last line
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:12:00 PM
Hello Jag, , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA
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