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A quatrain from my poem "Reflections of You"

Blue

Reflections of you are colored in blue

like the twilight that too soon would blend

with shadows of night as stars lost their light

and the love of my life had to end.





July 19, 2019

lost loverhyme

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Connie Marcum Wong

September 19, 2019 at 3:46 PM

Andrea this poemis not only gorgeous but very moving. Congratulations on your deserving Second Place win. I loved this beauty! : ) xxoo

Juliet Ligon

September 17, 2019 at 9:51 PM

Powerful piece. Congrats.

Probir Gupta

September 16, 2019 at 2:18 AM

Lovely, Andrea ... The twilight that too should blend with shadows of ... Just beautiful ... Congratulations on your obvious first ...

Janis Medders Tobechi

September 15, 2019 at 9:38 AM

Beautiful Andrea. The last line is unexpected and brings tears. Congratulations.

Susan Ashley

September 14, 2019 at 7:29 PM

Your poem is deeply moving in its reverie and rhythm, Andrea. Such tender imagery is wistfully portrayed. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Ann Foster

August 20, 2019 at 8:55 PM

Okay, this one demands a box of tissue all by itself. It was simply beautiful. A lovely write indeed. Ann

James Inman

July 27, 2019 at 5:13 PM

How touching and lovely.

CayCay Godwin

July 20, 2019 at 7:28 PM

Oh, my - this is emotionally gripping, goes straight to the heart and bound to place, Andrea. Oh my! Love, CayCay

Silent One

July 20, 2019 at 5:35 AM

Great imagery.. you did this very well Andrea...

Caren Krutsinger

July 20, 2019 at 1:31 AM

This is a gorgeous write, Andrea. I think Greg will be blown away by it. Your imagery captured me and made me smile.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 20, 2019 at 1:12 AM

Fantastic Andrea. I am sure Greg will love this one. I hope I have time to enter one tomorrow. It is too late tonight, my eyes are crossing. A top winner for sure! xxoo