Blown Away

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Inspired by a trip to Peggy's Cove, Nova Scotia - After driving along the coast to this infamous spot, we arrived just after sun set.  My tour guide and friend was apologetic for not getting me there while the sun was up.  I on the other hand, was totally enthrawled with the experience of being there in the black of night.

Stand here crucified with sin
Pummeled by the howling wind

Arms stretched wide, just you and me
Thrown to the mercy of the sea

Torn open to the blackest ocean's
Hypnotic, murky, moody motion 

Pulled to the edge and feeling small
Drawn here by your ghostly call

Rooted there on ancient stone
Petrified, I'm not alone

Through violent waves I search for calm
Trusting you'll do me no harm

Souls screaming, shattered space and time 
Take back what's yours, give me what's mine

Tortured surf, I feel your pain
I will not sink in you again

Jet black water, purple skies
Stung my ears and pierced my eyes

Primal, raw, bathed in your song
Part of you, though don't belong

Your ice cold breath whipping my face
It's time for me to leave this place

I turned my back in to the night
Stare up at your guardian light

Black hounds descend and steal the day
Pounding heart, I'm blown away!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/16/2016 2:34:00 PM
Wow, awesome form, Scott... Skat
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Date: 6/4/2016 10:17:00 AM
This is really amazing
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Date: 3/4/2015 7:02:00 AM
A marvellous visual piece of poetry. I'm also inspired by the tactile elements of this sensational piece.
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