Jerry Whalley Poet Imagism

Blown Away

a Mystic candle
enamouring Fire
             is so light --

shimmering tenuously
lurching shadows
            and listening 

intensely disinterested
neither attracted
             nor compelled --

only
waiting
with storms all around

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John Heck December 4, 2008 at 7:46 AM Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan November 29, 2008 at 9:03 PM Jerry - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown November 19, 2008 at 4:41 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter November 11, 2008 at 7:47 AM Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Sharon Winter August 25, 2008 at 1:56 PM Congratulations Jerry on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 25, 2008 at 8:27 AM Congratulations Jerry, on "Blown Away" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Michael Jordan August 24, 2008 at 7:14 PM jerry - very interesting poem - Congrats on being featured this week