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Blowing Play Off

Joined a blowing team We bowled once a week Practised, practised all week Big tournament coming soon All my team mates members Had gotten the high scores I tried to do the same To get a strike wasn't easy Sometimes three pins fall Then I would get a gutter ball The tournament begins All teams ready to win Each team taking turns Only one team would win It wasn't my team My certificate said Play Offs Champion I was so proud

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Date: 7/5/2018 1:42:00 PM
ohh, i bowl a lot, darlene and usually get a good score ... a champ of a write well done!...huggs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/6/2018 9:46:00 AM
Hello Nette thank you for the lovely comment.Are you using the big balls or the small ones? Have you ever won a trophyin wining a game? Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/5/2018 12:41:00 PM
So sweet... You express pure love in all its simplicity ... Very nice...all the best Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/6/2018 9:50:00 AM
Hello Michael thank you for the lovely comment.I do like to bowl. I have done it once so far. I plan to do it more often. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/4/2018 3:09:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I bowled for many years. Was not great but wasn't real bad either. Had a great time doing it. Nice poem. Enjoyed reading it.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2018 5:31:00 PM
Hello Bonnie House it is nice to meet you. It was my very first time. To handle big blowing balls is not easy. Yet I did the best I could. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 7/3/2018 6:35:00 PM
Hi Dar, Bowing can be so mush fun, then again it can be so disheartening when you score badly. I'm glad you found this game to play.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2018 11:18:00 AM
Hello Alfred bowling is fun it was my first time and even though I did badly I had a great time. I would have done better if the balls were smaller. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/3/2018 4:33:00 PM
Great poem and congratulations..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2018 11:20:00 AM
Hello Silent One I had fun even though I struggled with the big bowling ball. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/3/2018 3:38:00 PM
It is a really nice poem and a joy to read, you see winning isn't everything, its the fun in participating, the talent and of course the bestome wins, if we lose, that doesn't mean that we are bad, it simply means that the other team was better, so instead of giving up, we must try again, good luck and have a really nice day
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2018 11:23:00 AM
Hello Faraz Ajmal, tha was my very first time bowling and I did try hard to get the ball to knock down the pins. But the ball had other ideas. You know something ,I had fun. That is what counts. Have a nice day my friend.

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