Blowing Out the Candle
A birthday’s not a birthday
If a candle’s not involved,
Despite the fact I’ve no idea
Just how that rite evolved.
You do not need a cake –
A scone or muffin will suffice
Although, to many, iced or frosted
Cakes are rather nice.
Of course, some people do not like
A public-type display,
With candles and the birthday song
To celebrate their day.
But even if it’s private,
When that candle is aglow,
It feels more like a birthday;
Close your eyes and wish and blow!
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