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Blowing In the Wind

We’d gather on the old wooden porch gramps would sit in his rocking chair with wisps of smoke rising from his cigar I’d snuggle up to gran on the faded old swing seat We’d sip lemon tea and chat late into the night catching up on the news since I’d last visited I always loved to hear the music of the wind chimes tinkling as they danced on the warm summer breeze My grandparents passed many years ago but I can still hear that same music as the wind chimes now swing on my porch I hold in my heart precious memories of times past Wind chimes Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh FICTION POEM FOR CONTEST 8/28/18
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Roper Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 8:01 PM
Great imagery, Jan, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
Pappadogiannis Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 3:23 PM
This was beautiful Jan, congratulations on your win x :)
Lindley Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Last of my grandparents passed away in the 60's my dear friend. This finely crafted beauty reminded me of childhood times I spent with them.. A fav.. your verses always evidence of a kind and pure heart of a fine poetess.
Laurie Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:45 AM
G'day Jan … nicely presented Jan. I too love the tinkle of wind chimes; just wish my neighbour did - thank you Jan - Lindsay
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 2:45 PM
- Beautiful music in the wind - I have two as I hang in a tree in the summer - Sounds like delicious memories - A new winner poem ... wooow ... CONGRATULATIONS ... you are in the wind :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Hello Jan,this poem is so special,i feel the warmth of the love written in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Kiser Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Beautifully done; congratulations.
May Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Wonderful memories Jan..Congrats on your win..
Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Gosh, Jan---yet another trip down memory lane so well crafted. Blows us away, my dear! :) gw
Anish Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 8:43 PM
I miss my grandparents, too. As C.S.Lewis said : "Mankind must endure his going hence". Nice work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Ibeh Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Jan!:-) Congratulations on your win with this beautifully-crafted nostalgic poem!
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Very nice Jan...I love the soft sounding ones
Warrior Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 10:02 AM
A tuneful verse Jan...great musical memories...love & light...^WW^
Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Lovely poem. A FAVE, Jan.
Curtis Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 6:35 AM
I wonder if we ever appreciated those moments then as much as we do now, Nice piece Jan
Messina Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Such imagery as I can see you hugging your gran on the porch with the wind chimes ringing. Love this, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs // Charlie xx
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Thanks Charles I wish I had had grandparents, only a step step grandma and we were not close:-) hugs Jan xx
Babcock Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Memories are so great. Lovely poem. love phyl
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:53 AM
Thanks Phyl I just wish it had been true:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Nice reminiscing (even if it's fictional.) Good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:53 AM
Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Lovely <3
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Ahhh, I see you came up with another one that is reminiscing. Love it, Jan. I hope you made it into the contest in time. I saw your comment to Nina. Very well done in a nick of time!!
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:52 AM
I grabbed the last space in the contest - will pay more attention to the rules next time!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Doll Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Beautiful, Jan. Took me back to my visits to my grandparents. Wind chimes do store memories. Warren :)
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Thanks so much Warren, I wish I'd had the memories for real:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:55 PM
a perfect picture to accompany your poem, jan! your words really painted a very touching picture and i could almost hear those "wind chimes tinkling" as i read it...
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Thanks Ilene, I rushed to write to poem and am delighted with the positive comments:-) hugs jan xx
Blown Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:31 PM
metaphorically speaking...it is amazing how...the wind does 'chime'
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Sand Blown:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:11 PM
Beautiful poem, my friend, it brings me back to a gentle wind at my grandpa's house when I was 12, after grandma passed.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:15 PM
I wish it was true Caren but pure fiction for me. I wrote another poem for the contest but had screwed up big time as it was free verse so I rushed to get this one written but much prefer the haiku poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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