Blowing In the Trees

Whistling winds woo 
through thrashing twigs and shrubs.
Hitting, hollering, soon hushing
spring be springing sweet soundly winds
blowing in the deep dark of distant forests.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Great Alliteration that you have presented here..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Martin Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 8:56 PM
Sylvia- yes, in fact this is a weather report, reported using alliteration and poetic form. I observe nature and I enjoy writing what I see and hear from what Earth has to offer. Yes.. people do write about nature. If you don't want answers to your questions don't bother asking. It just makes you more of confused reader instead of a real critic. And personally, I don't care rather or not if I insult you.
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