S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Limerick

Blowing a Kiss

Blowing a  Kiss 

When irksome day, off tangles, comes unstuck
As  the  sun, behind a blushing sea, ducks 
Thoughts  of you I sorely miss
Pep  me up to blow this kiss
To find you stooping , a red rose, to pluck.



S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For: PD's 'Any rose' Contest

4th Aug 12

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Donna Jones April 1, 2013 at 11:18 AM We should always stop to enjoy the roses...wonderful win Jag...Donna

Tahera Mannan March 31, 2013 at 10:43 PM Simply beautiful, many congrats for this win.

Kim Merryman March 31, 2013 at 4:00 PM A lovely write, Jag! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Ralph Taylor March 31, 2013 at 10:41 AM Congrats, Jag. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2013 at 10:55 PM Jag, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2012 at 5:37 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Rose Poems" contest Jag.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 13, 2012 at 4:26 AM Congratulations Jag xx S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 13, 2012 at 5:10 AM Thanx, Mandy

David Williams August 13, 2012 at 2:19 AM Jag, congrats on your win..David S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 13, 2012 at 5:09 AM Thnx, David

Poet Destroyer A August 13, 2012 at 1:33 AM Jag, I love nothing more than roses & unicorns... congratulations and thanks once again for full filling my rose passion... xox~ :-) PD

Elizabeth Wesley August 12, 2012 at 8:43 AM Sweet one Jag, kissing is a great pastime!

Gwendolen Song August 8, 2012 at 2:58 PM Ohhh, this is fantastic, Jag with the blushing sea and the sun ducking..such strong personification...and the energy stored up in the 4th line...such a fun-tastic write! Enjoying your work here today...

Nette Onclaud August 6, 2012 at 4:05 AM simply charming me, jag... you put it all together so nicely!.. winning wishes and huggs!

Poet Destroyer A August 5, 2012 at 10:40 PM Jag,,i noticed that Michael, has a BLOW a Kiss contest... is this for his contest... and my contest.. if it is..it is a sweet idea.. I like how you combined both ideas together...I did that once, ..by the way....i love the ~pluck and pucker up look... thanks for the soup mail..xox~pd S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 5, 2012 at 11:04 PM This is for yours only,pd,... thnx, luv:) Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen August 4, 2012 at 6:48 AM A moving and sweet kiss - Beautiful! - wish you luck in contest - hope for a win for YOU . - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Williams August 4, 2012 at 4:17 AM Jag, a romantic limerick, I like it..David

Poet Destroyer A August 3, 2012 at 10:56 PM Jag... aweeee..how sweet... good luck in the contest..pd S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 4, 2012 at 1:48 AM thnx, pd