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Blowing a Kiss

Blowing a Kiss When irksome day, off tangles, comes unstuck As the sun, behind a blushing sea, ducks Thoughts of you I sorely miss Pep me up to blow this kiss To find you stooping , a red rose, to pluck. S.Jagathsimhan Nair For: PD's 'Any rose' Contest 4th Aug 12

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Donna Jones

Date: 4/1/2013 11:18:00 AM

We should always stop to enjoy the roses...wonderful win Jag...Donna

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/31/2013 10:43:00 PM

Simply beautiful, many congrats for this win.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2013 4:00:00 PM

A lovely write, Jag! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/31/2013 10:41:00 AM

Congrats, Jag. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2013 10:55:00 PM

Jag, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2012 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Rose Poems" contest Jag.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/13/2012 4:26:00 AM

Congratulations Jag xx

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 8/13/2012 5:10:00 AM

Thanx, Mandy

David Williams

Date: 8/13/2012 2:19:00 AM

Jag, congrats on your win..David

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 8/13/2012 5:09:00 AM

Thnx, David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2012 1:33:00 AM

Jag, I love nothing more than roses & unicorns... congratulations and thanks once again for full filling my rose passion... xox~ :-) PD

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2012 8:43:00 AM

Sweet one Jag, kissing is a great pastime!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/8/2012 2:58:00 PM

Ohhh, this is fantastic, Jag with the blushing sea and the sun ducking..such strong personification...and the energy stored up in the 4th line...such a fun-tastic write! Enjoying your work here today...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2012 4:05:00 AM

simply charming me, jag... you put it all together so nicely!.. winning wishes and huggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2012 10:40:00 PM

Jag,,i noticed that Michael, has a BLOW a Kiss contest... is this for his contest... and my contest.. if it is..it is a sweet idea.. I like how you combined both ideas together...I did that once, ..by the way....i love the ~pluck and pucker up look... thanks for the soup mail..xox~pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 8/5/2012 11:04:00 PM

This is for yours only,pd,... thnx, luv:) Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2012 6:48:00 AM

A moving and sweet kiss - Beautiful! - wish you luck in contest - hope for a win for YOU . - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 8/4/2012 4:17:00 AM

Jag, a romantic limerick, I like it..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2012 10:56:00 PM

Jag... aweeee..how sweet... good luck in the contest..pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 8/4/2012 1:48:00 AM

thnx, pd