Blowfish

on a white porcelain boat              
still gapping for air                         
raw flesh sliding down my throat  
lots of rice to share                         
dark eyes unaware                           
blowfish scare                                  
gloat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:12 AM
ut oh! a real dangerous dish! I bet you aretoo ;) Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Interesting work..Sushi?..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Well one of my husband's was an avid fisherman and we went out on our boat at least once a week .. ours was light green ... great visuals Robb ...
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