Blow

She can't see her shine
Her feelings always intertwine
Making her feel alone and confined
She can be happy, Hell she can even be fine
But her Emotions are like walking on a battle Field 
Waiting to hit a mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 12:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Leffanta Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 3:38 PM
The title misled but, but the craftsmanship did not! Well done! Aloha! Rico (should that be craftshership?)
Cunningham Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Sounds like a confused young lady Anne, love that last line, waiting to hit a mine. Tom
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