Blossoms' Wish

```` `` `````` Captivating my senses, a floral banquet robed in gold- orange pinafores with curls, their faces upturned to greet new sunset trays of daffodils rouse fields in fragile twirls Untold splendor blushes of dainty youth luring me to pluck scented ruffles in a dish, but oh, daffodils in a dance whisper the truth "we're born free"; I bow and make a wish!
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Burch Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Nette! Congratulations on your win here and all your wonderful wins! great showing!! Well Done! big hugs, love ya deb...
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:39 PM
what a pretty pretty poem I had not seen before! Congratulations, Nette.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!! Lori
Guzzi Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:30 PM
hmm I have wished on a dandylion puff but not a daffodil ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on your winning work.Sara
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Nette congrats on your win.David
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "175" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:35 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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March 6, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations on your win with this "captivating" poem. Very nice, Nette. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 10:03 AM
congrats Nette luvon a fab second place win for lovely floral wishes luv..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations nette nice one xx
Roberts Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 11:53 PM
congrats on your second place win nette, its lovely
Brown Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 12:41 PM
The best to you in Francine's contest. I am sure you will do quite well. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Beautiful written Nette, this poem is a pleasure to read.Thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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February 28, 2012 at 9:14 PM
I love the image of those daffodils in a dance, whisper the truth. Good one! How are you today, Nette? I don't remember if I thanked you yet for my place in your last contest. So thanks if I didn't say it yet! Luv, Andrea
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February 28, 2012 at 3:13 PM
I just love the beauty of your fine write you have written this fine day! I just love your gorgeous descriptions you have painted for all of us to enjoy! You have brought pleasure to my senses with these awesome words you have used to bring imagery to my mind! I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful write when I read your spectacular poem this evening Nette! Great Work!!
Horne Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 2:18 PM
My, what a lovely piece. Thanks, Nette - enjoyed your contest : )
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