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Blossoms' Wish

```` `` `````` Captivating my senses, a floral banquet robed in gold- orange pinafores with curls, their faces upturned to greet new sunset trays of daffodils rouse fields in fragile twirls Untold splendor blushes of dainty youth luring me to pluck scented ruffles in a dish, but oh, daffodils in a dance whisper the truth "we're born free"; I bow and make a wish!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/10/2012 10:54:00 AM
Nette! Congratulations on your win here and all your wonderful wins! great showing!! Well Done! big hugs, love ya deb...
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:39:00 PM
what a pretty pretty poem I had not seen before! Congratulations, Nette.
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!! Lori
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:30:00 PM
hmm I have wished on a dandylion puff but not a daffodil ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/9/2012 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work.Sara
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Date: 5/9/2012 7:15:00 AM
Nette congrats on your win.David
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Date: 5/9/2012 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "175" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 6:35:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this "captivating" poem. Very nice, Nette. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:03:00 AM
congrats Nette luvon a fab second place win for lovely floral wishes luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations nette nice one xx
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:53:00 PM
congrats on your second place win nette, its lovely
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:41:00 PM
The best to you in Francine's contest. I am sure you will do quite well. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:22:00 AM
Beautiful written Nette, this poem is a pleasure to read.Thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:14:00 PM
I love the image of those daffodils in a dance, whisper the truth. Good one! How are you today, Nette? I don't remember if I thanked you yet for my place in your last contest. So thanks if I didn't say it yet! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2012 3:13:00 PM
I just love the beauty of your fine write you have written this fine day! I just love your gorgeous descriptions you have painted for all of us to enjoy! You have brought pleasure to my senses with these awesome words you have used to bring imagery to my mind! I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful write when I read your spectacular poem this evening Nette! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/28/2012 2:18:00 PM
My, what a lovely piece. Thanks, Nette - enjoyed your contest : )
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