George Seal Poet Sonnet

Blossoms and Bubbles

Mischievous wee breezes blowing so wild.
   Taunting sweet blosoms; dare you fly with me.
   Petals so gentle, they play like a child.
   Children blow bubbles then burst them with glee.

   Bubbles ;are sky ships, sail kissing goodbye.
   Floating on breezes they gleam in the sun.
   Upwards and over those clouds in the sky.
   Blossoms; confetti free falling each one.

   Playing with children now jumping with joy.
   To catch falling blossoms, scented bouquet.
   Blossoms for maidens , when meeting a boy.
   Bubbles in fountains, two coins name the day.

   Bubbles small cuddles for two are one more.
   Sweet blossoms, our scent buds, love and adore.


   3/ 28/ 2015.

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:47 PM George, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~

Nette Onclaud April 14, 2015 at 1:36 AM charming me with your superb piece, george.. big congrats!

Jan Allison April 12, 2015 at 6:18 PM Dropping back with my congrats George:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless April 12, 2015 at 10:14 AM Love the imagery and playfulness of this poem. Congrats on the win George.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 12, 2015 at 9:58 AM George, ---The pretty rhythmic lines swayed and captivated me as I am reading this. The use of children echoes the glowing vibrancy and flair of bubbles and blossoms(children—maiden &boy) you focused on the them but to me it reflected so much more, the line 1st line on 2nd stanza & 2nd line on 1st Stanza, draws the life of bubbles and blossoms.. Thanks much and CONGRATULATIONS! hugs//olive eloisa

Eve Roper April 2, 2015 at 2:48 PM Wonderful imagery a 7 for this delightful poem. Have a Happy Easter George Seal April 6, 2015 at 5:09 PM Hi Eve, thankyou for visiting my site once again, and your very kind comment on my poem. I wish you a very happy Easter too. George.

Casarah Nance March 28, 2015 at 6:51 PM Wonderful take on the prompt, best of luck to you ;) George Seal March 30, 2015 at 5:06 PM Hi Casarah, thanks for your support in the contest. So happy that you liked the poem. Regards George.

Jan Allison March 28, 2015 at 6:23 PM such wonderful imagery - absolutely beautiful good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 5:16 PM I have been inspired by people here in fact if it was not for Jenny Brewer seeing my poems on another friend's facebook page and badgering me to join here (which took a month) then I guess i would never have been as prolific as I have been and not having the most amazing time of my life:-) Hugs Jan xx George Seal March 30, 2015 at 5:13 PM Hello my friend hello again Jan, so nice of you to call again. You inspire me always to keep on writing poetry. I do so very much appreciate your beautiful comments Cheers George.

Joseph May March 28, 2015 at 4:49 PM Beautiful write George.. 7 ... George Seal March 30, 2015 at 5:18 PM Hello Joseph,thankyou for taking time to comment on my poem. I do appreciate it. Cheers George.