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Blossoming For Growth

Sunshine and roses 
    bright and Reposed
Blossoming and pleasing
    growth is Exposed
Rustling up in  breezes 
    flows a flowery Prose
A love whispers gently
    collecting in morning Dew
Opening petals of bllssful
    purely abiding in View
Tending a garden so true
    this field is Renewed

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Arturo Michael

Date: 7/30/2017 7:26:00 PM

If this is your first, then I can't imagine what will be your second and third...Very good...Natural in every way...Enjoyed it...Thanks for sharing...Good night

Holly Bohto
Date: 7/30/2017 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Arturo.....progress before perfection...striving to expose....a writing in prose.

Thomas Hsi

Date: 7/30/2017 10:10:00 AM

I really like the way your poem reads. A fine poem!

Holly Bohto
Date: 7/30/2017 10:15:00 AM

Tending in gardens truth this field is renewed. Flows better.....Thanks Thomas. I'm a fan of in the raw emotion of writing, then edit later down the road...