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Blossoming
        much like a bud
              in spring
            prying open.
     Their dream of love is
            coming true.
              Romance
              unbidden.
              Love has
           snuck up and
         struck them like
          a cupid's arrow.
    Love was written in their...
                  eyes,
    and deep in their hearts!

                  (Yalto)


Submitted for...
Strand Select K, Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Date: 02/10/2020

Date written: 02/08/2020
"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/9/2020 7:34:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/9/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay:-)
Date: 2/9/2020 2:49:00 AM
Edward...absolutely stunning verse. May try your Yalto form. Looks very challenging... Panagiota xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/9/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota:-)
Date: 2/8/2020 9:33:00 PM
I love your Yalto Form! Lovely Valentine verse!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/8/2020 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:-) You excel at Yalto poems, for sure!

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