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Blooms On the Moon

They were extremely fragrant,
On the last night of my life,
As I dreamt of blooms rampant-
A part of the lunar nightlife!
Varicolored flowers did bloom,
All over the dark silvery moon.


Written on May 24, 2021
For: Bite Size Poem 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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May 25, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Lovely Evelyn. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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May 25, 2021 at 5:31 PM
So glad you like it, Judy. Thank you so much. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
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May 25, 2021 at 3:06 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You've penned such a stunning and creative write. The imagery is just just breathtaking. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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May 25, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Thank you for your joyous words and well wishes, Alexis. Your appreciation is gratifying. Have a lovely evening. Blessings, Evelyn :D
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:09 PM
Wouldn't the moon look lovelier with blooms on its surface?
Buehler Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 11:10 AM
It's certainly a lovely thought, isn't it? :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Oh this is so beautiful! Bless you, my friend!
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thank you. Glad you like it, Kim. All my best, Evelyn
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May 24, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Interesting and exceptionally creative, Evelyn. Nice work!
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Thank you so much, Milton. :)
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May 24, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Incredible creative mind Evelyn, you anticipated the blossom on the moon, might be it will be found a long time from now, around then I don't figure we will be near. Yet, until further notice, I wish you an extraordinarily long life.
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:09 PM
I wish the same for you, my friend. Thank you for your heartwarming support. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
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May 24, 2021 at 5:43 PM
Wonderful imagery. Well penned indeed. Have a good night my friend.
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Thank you for the spirit lifting words, David. I hope you enjoy your night as well.
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