Blooms In the Rain

She has closed her eyes to the rain
    But flowers bloom out of her pain
 Her beauty framed in black and white
    Needs no color to delight
 Through the mist she softly weeps 
   And teardrop dreams are all she keeps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Williams Gault Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 5:11 AM
My goodness, what a beautifully creative concept, wow. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Joseph..
Sergi Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Hi Joseph: A great interpretation!
Lane Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 5:48 PM
"Teardrop dreams" is a sad but honest expression of her emotions. Well done, Joseph.
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:27 PM
I remember how much I liked this from before. You were wonderfully inspired. BIG congrats for your win.
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Congrats Joseph to win on the nice poem. Anisha D
Devnath  Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Canerdy Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 11:15 AM
A 7 for sure! Congrats on your great win! Janice
Daniel Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Oh! This is beautiful:) congratulations on your win:) A fav and a 7:}
Misra Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Very well written, Joseph. Congratulations on your win.
A   Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:47 AM
Joseph, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:47 AM
Awesome flow Joseph, I sure enjoyed the is one. LINDA
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 2:53 PM
- Wonderful written, Joseph - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:21 AM
What an excellent interpretation, Joseph! I have seen that picture, and you captured its total essence. #7 ~ Regards // paul
Onclaud Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 5:44 AM
such lovey, brooding images, joseph.. well done and huggs
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:24 PM
wow, you really thought up something cool for that picture. I hope I can do the same.
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Great interpretation of the visual Joseph:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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