Blooming Tenderly

A swarm of whispers kisses my face Like tender blossoms, a full view; In morning’s bid, I find thrilled embrace Through good-bye romps as sunrise debuts On fragrant petals carousing dew. My eyes follow his parting tracks on wings As day rouses wisps of garlands’ crowns, Clusters of buds wheeze a mild buzzing To invite play, bouquets tap on ground Their hemlines sway, waltzing all around. When hours cling of delight, time endures And I breathe him as buds fondle my hands, But purple descends to weave sleep’s lure; Sadly, florets close as night expands Till he arrives, with roses on strands. For Francine Roberts'Contest Romance Me with English Quintains by nette onclaud 2 nov 2012
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Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara
Mannan Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Beautiful Write Nette. Warm congrats for the win.
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 10:20 PM
congrats nette on your 4th place win, great job
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November 4, 2012 at 7:13 AM
The last lines adorned the real picture of romance. Wonderful always. Good luck. Always, bl
Gasun Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 1:15 AM
Super wow for this very romantic poem of yours, Nette! I love every word you've used to paint the lovely picture in your quaintain making me feel blooming tenderly too while reading it. ;)). Winner for sure! Thanks for stopping by and looking forward to read my work. I've new poem to post later; but I'm still thinking of form and title, lol. For me, I'm still a novice here who's still learning and experimenting, (particularly the forms of poetry) :)) i love experimenting. million thx! love, LG
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November 3, 2012 at 7:52 PM
wonderful poem nette, love elizabeth
Roberts Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 6:19 PM
lovely imagery nette
Sivey Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 5:17 PM
Awww, this is really a sweet poem after all my friend! I am thrilled after reading this incredibly awesome poem Nette! Your descriptiveness brought images of grandiosity to my mind! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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November 3, 2012 at 4:57 PM
Nette, you are so romantic on a Saturday night ...... Gorgeous poem! hugs / / Anne-Lise :)
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