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"Blooming"
In the quietening of my days there is a dream there he whispers cutting tales with sharp teeth in my mind in he swims in calm waters at the end of a long long story You are far gone lost for past glory where future curls its fingers around your fate where there you once stood so fresh and wet in Life waiting the longest re-wind like an old tape ribbons of black viciously ripped out now slack a child long gone family films on scratchy videotape ultra sound evaporates I play it on repeat the cycle of complexity yet it is far too simple with each read to understand what was not ever flexible and that which was great the sleep of Rumpelstiltskin awakening a stranger others warn you stay away from the fire stay away from the danger In the quietening of my days there is a dream there lost love letters from the soul discovered open arms, looking upwards smiling The shark planting blooms each seed found and like a pearl sewn into the cover of a new book sensed yet still unknown I calculate all the imaginary wounds Love bombed and swooning in a flooded heart blood red rose rising razor edged and naked bit large red light shining some kind love please let it be the kindest love blooming in the gloaming where an Ocean swells inside this whirlpool where an army of sharks shed salt tears amidst their ravenous timing Moon draws you in wrapping her beams around you she is swelling around you her Ocean tide voluptuous high rising (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)

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Date: 10/29/2022 7:41:00 PM
Ludovico Einaudi - Una mattina (1hr loop) https://youtu.be/IMZbiLgHKzA
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/29/2022 7:41:00 PM
Ludovico Einaudi - Una mattina FULL ALBUM https://youtu.be/0Bvm9yG4cvs
Date: 9/25/2020 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Leanne on POTD...A great write as usual...Keep them coming
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/25/2020 1:00:00 PM
Thank you. x
Date: 9/22/2020 3:20:00 PM
Wonderful ... compliments on POTD won ... Aloha! .
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/22/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/22/2020 1:20:00 PM
Oh bravo, very well penned imagery and metaphor in this piece. Congrat's on your POTD!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/22/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/22/2020 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and flow, Lady L.! You are on a roll! Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 9/22/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/22/2020 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/22/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/22/2020 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations Modesty.. brilliant piece
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/22/2020 6:18:00 PM
possibly ... V.S.A.S. All in its correct place, all in its own time.
Date: 9/22/2020 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!!! What a story/poem. The ocean is very powerful. I love and miss the beach. Wish I could take a walk on the sand. Enjoy your win............
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/22/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/22/2020 8:10:00 AM
Lady L, such a voluptuous tide of powerful images of sea and moon and past videotapes and love letters. A feeling of cleansing throughout, like breathing out old air and letting in the new. Well done, and congrats on your POTD ~ John
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/22/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/21/2020 1:35:00 PM
“There's nothing in the sea this fish would fear. Other fish run from bigger things. That's their instinct. But this fish doesn't run from anything. He doesn't fear.” Peter Benchley, Jaws
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Date: 9/21/2020 1:32:00 PM
https://youtu.be/dyIeNYt_Vvs
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Date: 9/21/2020 1:31:00 PM
https://youtu.be/Rc7_lCfbQP0
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Date: 9/21/2020 6:22:00 AM
The great arms of the sea will carry you off to your destiny. Beautiful Modesty. One of your very best.
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Date: 9/22/2020 1:33:00 AM
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Date: 9/21/2020 5:10:00 PM
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Date: 9/21/2020 1:39:00 PM
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Date: 9/21/2020 1:36:00 PM
"Cock your hat - angles are attitudes."

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