Bloomed

Amidst the broken woods Sprout the flowers hued; Under the harlequin wonders Euphoric fairies play and wander Sans seeds these floras arise ~ The bloom of mushrooms

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/4/2021 2:17:00 PM

You have painted such a lovely picture in just six lines, Supraja. I like how you ended it, too. Good luck in the contest. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/1/2021 1:00:00 PM

Your "Bloomed" is a creative write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/weekend..........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/1/2021 6:42:00 AM

I have seen mushrooms growing in my pots. But I know they are poisonous. o do be careful. :)

Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/1/2021 7:05:00 AM

Mushrooms in pots? Interesting!!! But not all the mushrooms are poisonous... Thanks for stopping by...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2021 6:34:00 AM

Nature is amazing--I see the mushrooms rising through your words. All the best Supraja.

Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/1/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank you so much... So glad to hear from you...