James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Bloom of Pink

On this Autumn day
In my local park
A corner so bright
Out shines the dark
 
Trees of pink
On their final bloom
Dying carpet
Empty room
 
Branches so bare
Raped of leave
Naked trees
Towards winter grieve
 
Natures cycle of life
In seasonal burn
Soon her spray of colour
Will joyously return



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Sara Kendrick July 14, 2009 at 9:27 AM Enjoyed the expressiveness of this Rhyme and this also could be methaphoric . Sara

Raul Moreno July 4, 2009 at 11:13 AM Excellent work, "Dying carpet" very unique and goes great with a bed of fallen leaves...Raul

Nicole Sharon Brown July 3, 2009 at 8:34 PM Oh so beautiful and descriptive

James Peranteau July 3, 2009 at 6:28 PM I love these rhymes you've been sharing James,..just fantastic,..its going well with the blasted fire works out mine window ! *smiles* james

Charmaine Chircop July 3, 2009 at 4:12 PM THE CYCLE OF LIFE---BLENDED MIXTURE OF COLOURS--SEASONS--AND REALITIES--GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND--CHARMA

James Marshall Goff July 3, 2009 at 2:16 PM Highlander, I love the sweet cadence of this Celtic poem, nice...jim