Bloom

Oh, at last I bloom
I don't have to beg for bees
they're surrounding me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Just reviwing my fav poems list. this is as standout for me as ever! Luv, Andrea
A   Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Love it Juan, a very creative bright flower it is.. pollen attract them buzzing bees no need to beg,..LeeAnn
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 11:19 PM
WONDERFUL. A FAV for this beauty!
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July 30, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Oh, I can relate to this one. The scene comes alive through your words. I've been away from the site so I apologize for now responding earlier. Thank you for all the kind comments on my poems. They are greatly appreciated. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
George   Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 3:47 PM
I love Haiku's I enjoye this one very much, Juan. Lainie
K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 2:37 AM
very cute haiku Juan! enjoyed how all those bees are swarming now-- nikko :)
Knop Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Lovely penned Haiku, Juan and thank you for your kind comments on my poems! Have a nice week ahead!...Gert
Mehta Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 6:22 AM
A nice thought well penned.
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July 19, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Well done my friend..
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 4:17 AM
lovely,flowery honeyed haiku. .Celene!
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