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Oh, at last I bloom I don't have to beg for bees they're surrounding me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/15/2010 8:38:00 AM
Just reviwing my fav poems list. this is as standout for me as ever! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/29/2010 6:14:00 PM
Love it Juan, a very creative bright flower it is.. pollen attract them buzzing bees no need to beg,..LeeAnn
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:19:00 PM
WONDERFUL. A FAV for this beauty!
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Date: 7/30/2010 1:04:00 PM
Oh, I can relate to this one. The scene comes alive through your words. I've been away from the site so I apologize for now responding earlier. Thank you for all the kind comments on my poems. They are greatly appreciated. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/26/2010 3:47:00 PM
I love Haiku's I enjoye this one very much, Juan. Lainie
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Date: 7/23/2010 2:37:00 AM
very cute haiku Juan! enjoyed how all those bees are swarming now-- nikko :)
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:46:00 AM
Lovely penned Haiku, Juan and thank you for your kind comments on my poems! Have a nice week ahead!...Gert
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:22:00 AM
A nice thought well penned.
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:58:00 AM
Well done my friend..
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:17:00 AM
lovely,flowery honeyed haiku. .Celene!
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