Bloom

I would rather cling to the edge of a cliff as an ugly, wiry, 
weed
than be a beautiful rose confined to a pot. 

They try to unfold your velvet petals with their clumsy, feeble 
hands, 
whereas I remain unscathed by any but my own. 
You will be severed for your beauty, because that’s what they 
think of
love. 

No greedy hands will find my own. I will stand
alone; 
strong and free. 

I will see more than brick walls from glass cages; 
I will see a world of color beneath my roots. 

Let them sulk in beauty, harnessed by a pot of dirt; 
for I would sooner wilt on a cliff’s edge
gazing out towards an unfathomable beauty, rather than by 
confined by 
my own. 

I will let them be as flowers, going no further, seeing no more. 
A bud
hanging low, amidst buds.
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artlyy Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 10:29 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Ashta Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 10:10 PM
"gazing out towards an unfathomable beauty, rather than by confined by my own" REAL
Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Seeker Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 7:52 PM
Beautifully penned, soul uplifting thoughts
Theraven Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Very nice worldly weeds in bloom Taylor. -Richard
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