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Bloody Valentine

She drew the blood from my neck and whispered ‘My bloody valentine!’ We would transform into bats And would soar throughout the city Looking for fresh prey together We’d find the red meat and tear the souls to pieces Devouring the life essence through pints of blood Our union has never been so strong two hunters seeking together the pulsing heartbeats of the innocence And then in silence In the darkness of the night we would sip on each others blood as only lovers can do For we are vampires and the night is ours

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Date: 2/12/2025 1:22:00 AM
Dear robert, this is a very creative and brilliant vampire ish write for the contest! Love your wordplay and flow of lines in this and how you've presented your poem too. Especially love the fourth stanza! How intense and fitting for the theme and for the prompt too! Brilliant! Pleasure reading your poem today. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
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Date: 2/10/2025 3:32:00 PM
Oh yes. You did GREAT here
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Date: 2/7/2025 6:46:00 PM
A lovely poem. My two owls outside would commend you because this hunting is exactly what they do. I keep the cat inside. I'll stick with blood sausage.
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Date: 2/7/2025 11:13:00 AM
WOW!!! What a write/story you have here. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..................
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