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Bloody Murder

underneath front porch
me screaming bloody murder -
frightened the suspect

poisonous snake, an owl,
a squirrel or big mistake?

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Bj Legros Kelley

August 18, 2023 at 4:28 PM

Wow, I'm glad it left, whatever it was!!

Kim Rodrigues

August 18, 2023 at 4:47 PM

My husband didn’t find anything but I tell you the sound was right at my feet…lol

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2023 at 2:30 PM

Well at least you scared it away. Glad it was not a skunk!

Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2023 at 5:02 PM

I don’t know if I did or not…lol!

Paula Goldsmith

August 17, 2023 at 9:55 AM

I enjoyed your write. Guess dinner is on. Have a great day.............

Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2023 at 10:06 AM

LOL…no!

Vijay Pandit

August 17, 2023 at 4:41 AM

A dangerous encounter. You captured the moment splendidly, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2023 at 4:56 AM

Thank you, Vijay! Always glad to see your comments:)

Sara Kendrick

August 17, 2023 at 1:49 AM

I think a big mistake that is you being under there. LOL..Well, what was under the front porch. I would guess an armadillo. LOL..Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2023 at 4:57 AM

The only thing that went underneath was my scream. LOL! Thank you, Sara!