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Bloody Murder

underneath front porch me screaming bloody murder - frightened the suspect poisonous snake, an owl, a squirrel or big mistake?

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/18/2023 4:28:00 PM

Wow, I'm glad it left, whatever it was!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2023 4:47:00 PM

My husband didn’t find anything but I tell you the sound was right at my feet…lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2023 2:30:00 PM

Well at least you scared it away. Glad it was not a skunk!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 5:02:00 PM

I don’t know if I did or not…lol!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2023 9:55:00 AM

I enjoyed your write. Guess dinner is on. Have a great day.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 10:06:00 AM

LOL…no!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/17/2023 4:41:00 AM

A dangerous encounter. You captured the moment splendidly, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 4:56:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! Always glad to see your comments:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2023 1:49:00 AM

I think a big mistake that is you being under there. LOL..Well, what was under the front porch. I would guess an armadillo. LOL..Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 4:57:00 AM

The only thing that went underneath was my scream. LOL! Thank you, Sara!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/16/2023 5:57:00 PM

Ironic poetry, said within just a few lines- it's very clever!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!