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5th in Monoklitteration Contest (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: June 2nd, 2025

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beliefs between bones break biology
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Dear Trina, your alliterative monoku is deep, evocative, emotive and ingenious! Love the title too! Fantastic truth! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Layne Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Thank you, Susan. I am so happy it has resonated with you. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 2:31 AM
- Great written, Trina :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
Layne Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Hello, Anne-Lise! Thanks for the encouragement.
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