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_{^{Nette Onclaud}}

_{^{MONOKLITTERATION Poetry Contest}}

May 31st, 2025

beliefs between bones break biology

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2025 8:55:00 AM

love your study of contrast; you are a sensitive poet, trina...congrats on your fine win with my thanks for supporting my contest!

Trina Layne
Date: 6/2/2025 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Nette! Blessings!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/1/2025 11:14:00 AM

Dear Trina, your alliterative monoku is deep, evocative, emotive and ingenious! Love the title too! Fantastic truth! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Trina Layne
Date: 6/1/2025 4:59:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. I am so happy it has resonated with you. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2025 2:31:00 AM

- Great written, Trina :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Trina Layne
Date: 6/1/2025 7:05:00 AM

Hello, Anne-Lise! Thanks for the encouragement.