Bloodlet Moments of Feeling

The breaking down at dawn did nothing  
I bled  
ancient pop top ruins  
resurrected  
in the hollow that once was you  
 
branded and braided  
fingers tangled in your colored hair  
I was stuck  
peeling off dried glue  
we had once loved  
to inhale  
 
I inhaled  

the beauty  
swirling about that mind  
could there ever be  
such a better time  
that captured me  
without a rhyme  
 
there was no reason  
it was just a season  
added with a pinch of thyme  
 
I was the lemon  
you were my tea  
together we felt free  
 
even tho we were nailed to our own tables  
I could surely eat  
it was no easy feat  
walking separate streets  
 
a gentle guiding hand  
afraid of a little sand  
"imprégnez-moi" what was said  
drinking/dreaming in our bed  
 
one could want no more  
 
no more  
oh no more  
 
 
               ~  
 
the sun she stings my eyes  
I never meant to cry  
no, I never meant to cry

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Date: 4/14/2024 3:09:00 PM
She sounds like "trouble" with a capital T.
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Date: 4/20/2024 3:51:00 PM
She is
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Date: 4/14/2024 3:31:00 PM
Oof! Yepper
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